|The Universal Guard sends Commander Jace Weston to track a fugitive. After chasing him, he ends up in this world, inside a castle's a harem. The fugitive escapes with one of the harem's girls, who happens to be a princess. Jace finds her and suddenly he dreams about what he can never have...
I missed some character description at the beginning, it was hard to understand what was what and where. There was so many things going on that I got lost, and when that happens during a sci-fi book people usually stop reading. The overly descriptive action scenes were everywhere and the storyline got lost. It feels like the author had a lot of good ideas, but then had a little trouble fitting it all into a short novella. I liked all the creatures and the fantastic world it's set in. The idea and the concept were great, but the writing and planning needed more work.
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