Kalen Ashler, however, didn’t want the marriage either. During a trade agreement, Keelie’s father offered her hand in marriage, and had he turned it down, it would’ve been considered an insult and led to war. But he also refuses to consummate the marriage, out of respect for Keelie, and reasons he keeps to himself. But when both Keelie and Kalen lose control briefly, and Kalen kisses her, Keelie is left wondering about her marriage bed, and if maybe the marriage wasn’t such a bad idea.

Ashler was a strictly short romance, with small ties to a science-fiction/fantasy setting. But as a short story, it did fairly well in letting me get to know the characters. The romance never led to a completely definitive “I love you” (though it was close), but I was much more inclined to believe that both characters thought they could be happy together, rather than seeing them falling in love. And it was very believable that Keelie could find herself attracted to Kalen, as well as come to care for him. He took the time to consider her side of things, and take a respectful distance (though that was also self-motivated). Most women in her position would, at the very least, soften towards him. I didn’t completely understand Kalen’s position, beyond that he was attracted to Keelie, and needed her acceptance, but it wasn’t far-fetched to think he could bond with Keelie because of his personality and history. Ashler is one of the better short stories out there, and I’m certainly glad I read it. It was very genuine and sweet, and I wouldn’t tell anyone to overlook it.

Overall rating:
Sensuality rating: Very sensual

Reviewer: Tara Black
December 28, 2004