College Trouble
Elise HepnerErotic fiction
Available from Excessica
March 2010
| Marie and Clair, college roommates and all around best friends, find an alternate route to studying for their final exams. Instead, they act on their feelings for each other, feelings Marie has kept buried for far too long. Are they ready to finally take their friendship to the next level? What about their finals? Will they fail after a night of no study? Or is there -- another way?
College Trouble, despite being short and simplistic, is sweet and exciting. I liked Marie and Clair immensely. Their proximity is very real, and seeing them go from best friends to lovers was very touching in its easiness. I also liked the whole college environment, and I was pleasantly surprised to see the plot include their very real fight with their studies. Finally, the end was unexpected and a complete turn-on. It is immoral and a little forbidden, but still incredibly erotic. Nevertheless, even though I thought the conclusion was hot and edgy, I still hoped to have seen more involvement. No matter how sizzling and convincing the relationships and the sex are, some key emotions were lacking, and the lack of development in that front greatly harmed this story.
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Reviewer: Athena |
