| Nicholas Dumont sat in the coffeehouse/bookstore trying to drink his too hot coffee. He kept stealing glances at the woman two tables over. Anna, the owner, sat pounding on her laptop, ignoring everyone around. Nic decided to introduce himself. He found out she was forty-two to his twenty-eight and she seemed uninterested. Suddenly she said "do you want a quickie?" and then it began.
I know erotica is written to tantalize people's fantasies, but I still like some kind of a plot. The author did incorporate a small story with the sex and the characters were strong and well put together. Still I would have enjoyed a little more detail in their background and surroundings. The sex scenes were hot but not smoking hot. It needed a little more tease until the explosive climax.
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Reviewer: Theresa B. |