| Wanting whips, chains, or dressing like a dominatrix for a photo shoot
doesn't stun photographer Chris one bit, especially since he
specializes in fetish photos. What does throw him through a loop is
sexy Jenny who comes for a photo shoot but ended up getting so much
more.
While I thought the premise was promising I don't think the story was long enough to efficiently allow the character's attraction to grow or for the utmost trust needed for a BDSM relationship. The relationship didn't transition smoothly enough to seem natural. Also there was a lot of bouncing with the POV, the POV changed so often so quickly it was rather jarring. I will give you this it was a hot one. I truly believe Ms. Falconer has great talent for writing I just don't think she had enough room or the right plot to showcase it.
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Reviewer: Diamond Taylor |