His Trick, Her Treat
RJ FuryContemporary romance
Available from Breathless Press
ISBN: 978-1-926930-49-7
April 2011
| His Trick, Her treat is the story of Tracy and Reed, co-workers who had a tendency to avoid each other at work. Reed, being somewhat shy, and Tracy not much of a joiner, neither had the nerve to come to each other to get to know one another. But a Halloween costume party ostensibly being thrown by Reed would change all that.
This was a cute story, the couple wanting each other, but neither willing to act on it, they needed a catalyst to jump start their romance. Mr. Fury definitely turned the heat up for the couple, but in my opinion kept harping on their sweating a little too much. Sure we sweat during sex, it's a great way to burn calories and heat up a room. But when every other sentence brings it up, it's a little much. Other than that, the imagery was not so bad. It was easy to picture the scene in the mind's eye. I was also left hoping the couple would make it. Both characters were likable, and it was nice to have the female be a little more aggressive than the male, without her coming off like a dominatrix. Overall, I thought it was a very good short story.
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Reviewer: Xion |
